How to Pitch to Angel Investors: A Spoken Script

Angel investors want a concise case linking a specific customer problem, evidence, funding ask, and milestone rather than a tour of every company detail. Keep the Elevator pitch under 1 minute, and use PitchLeague.ai evidence showing that reporting ARR made startups twice as likely to raise at pre-seed.

What should you say first to an angel investor?

Angel investors should hear: “I’m building [product] for [specific customer] who currently [pain]. We have [evidence], and I’m raising [amount] to reach [milestone]. I’d like your view on whether this is a problem worth solving and whether a second conversation makes sense.”

Name one customer. Name one painful moment. Name one funding milestone. Do not begin with your company history, your biography or every feature. The opening gives the angel a decision frame: customer, pain, evidence, capital and next step.

The consensus advice says an angel pitch should cover the problem, solution, market, business model, traction, team, projections, risks and funding request. That remains necessary when the investor asks for diligence. It breaks down as an opening strategy because forcing every business fact into the first minute turns a conversation into a compressed slide deck.

A friendly seed pitch should earn a specific second conversation, not demand an immediate cheque. Stripe’s investor-outreach guidance separates securing the meeting from closing the investment. HBS AngelsNYC’s advice also prioritises preparation, realism and honest treatment of risk. Use the first exchange to test whether the angel understands the problem and challenges the assumptions that matter.

The format has a firm boundary. Stripe’s angel-pitch guide recommends an elevator pitch under one minute. BDC’s angel-investor guide recommends a 60-second company description and investor-fit work. Expand only when the angel wants the longer business case.

A useful conversation can expose a weak assumption. It cannot prove that the company will raise, win customers or achieve its projections. The approach still holds when the angel has requested a full presentation or entered formal diligence; then completeness matters more than the opening exchange.

How do you prepare an angel pitch in 15 minutes?

A 15-minute angel-pitch preparation produces five spoken lines: problem, solution, proof, ask and the milestone the funding buys.

Write them in that order. Keep each line concrete. “Independent cafés lose bookings when phone orders are missed” is useful. “The market is huge” is not.

Build the proof line from your strongest available evidence. Use paid traction first. If you lack it, use a working product, observed customer behaviour, relevant intellectual property or directly relevant founder experience. Name the evidence plainly. Do not turn interest, interviews or a waiting list into revenue.

Translate the figures before you speak:

• TAM: the total potential customer market.
• CAC: the cost of acquiring one customer.
• LTV: the revenue or gross profit one customer is expected to generate over the relationship.
• Churn rate: the rate at which customers leave.
• Unit economics: the income and cost attached to one customer or transaction.
• Gross margin: revenue left after direct delivery costs.
• Net income: what remains after all costs.
• Monthly burn rate: cash the company spends each month.
• Cash-flow breakeven: the point where cash coming in covers cash going out.

Stripe’s angel-pitch guide defines CAC and churn rate and recommends best-case, worst-case and most-likely projections. Label gaps: “We are testing this assumption.” Never present an unvalidated TAM or forecast as fact.

The Founder Files analysed 17,546 pitch decks and found that reporting ARR correlated with twice the likelihood of raising at pre-seed; prior startup experience and a technical co-founder also belong in your answers when they genuinely apply (The Founder Files: The largest quantitative analysis of…). Its dataset shows correlation, not causation. A meta-analysis examined more than 100 papers and millions of investment decisions, so investor signals vary.

What exact lines belong in a two-minute seed pitch?

Angel investors need a two-minute spoken case that links a costly customer problem to evidence, a funding mechanism and a measurable milestone. Stripe’s investor-outreach guide recommends delivering this version without notes and practising it aloud with people outside the company.

Use this script. Replace every bracket before you rehearse:

“The problem is [specific costly moment]. Today, [customer] uses [current workaround], which fails because [reason].

We solve it by [mechanism]. So far, [evidence]. Our model is [how money enters], with [unit-economics fact or honest unknown].

Our first market is [narrow segment], before we expand to [larger segment]. We are raising [amount] through [ownership equity or convertible debt] to reach [milestone].

The money pays for [two or three uses], and the next proof point is [specific result].

The risks are [risk one] and [risk two]. I would value your view on [specific assumption]. If the fit is right, could we schedule a second conversation?”

Make the first sentence costly and concrete. “The problem is inefficient onboarding” sounds abstract. “The problem is a care provider losing an afternoon because appointment cancellations arrive too late” gives the listener something to test.

Make the evidence line measurable without overstating it. Use paid customers, repeat usage, a working product, a signed pilot or meaningful intellectual property. HBS AngelsNYC stresses paid traction, meaningful intellectual property, realistic terms and honest risks. Do not turn interest, interviews or a waiting list into revenue.

Make the ask operational. “We need money to grow” is incomplete. Name the work, then name the proof it should produce. For example: “The money pays for two engineers and a targeted sales test, and the next proof point is repeat purchasing from the first customer segment.”

Keep the market line narrow. State the first buyer and buying event before mentioning the larger opportunity. Use TAM as context, not as a substitute for a reachable customer.

The one-minute elevator pitch is the compressed version: problem, solution, evidence and ask. The two-minute version adds the model, market boundary, risks and use of funds. A pitch deck earns its place only when the angel wants the supporting detail. SBN’s pitch structure describes a ten-part flow and the Guy Kawasaki 10/20/30 rule: ten slides, 20 minutes and 30-point type (What to include in your pitch to angel…). Do not force all ten sections into the opening. The spoken pitch should create a clear reason to examine the evidence.

How should you answer the three replies most likely to follow?

Angel investors test the investment case through scrutiny, so answer the question asked, show the evidence, and connect it to the next milestone, as BDC’s angel-investor guide recommends.

“Why now?”

Say:

“The trigger is [customer change, market shift or observed behaviour]. We have [evidence], and this round tests whether that trigger produces repeatable demand.”

Name the trigger. A new regulation, a changed buying process or repeated customer behaviour is useful. “The market is huge” is not urgency.

Offer the evidence behind the trigger. Use customer interviews, paid pilots, repeat usage, signed letters of intent or a measurable change in buying behaviour. Then name the next test:

“Our next milestone is [specific result] from [customer group] by [condition]. If we do not see that result, we will revise the assumption.”

If the trigger remains unproven, say so. An honest hypothesis gives the angel something useful to assess.

“Why will customers switch, and why can’t an incumbent copy you?”

Say:

“Customers switch because [specific advantage]. Our defensibility is [intellectual property, distribution, data, workflow or founder access], and the part we still need to prove is [gap].”

Keep the claims separate. A better feature explains switching. It does not automatically explain defensibility. HBS AngelsNYC’s pitch guidance stresses honest treatment of risks, terms and valuation.

Offer one customer example and one proof point. Then name the next test:

“We will test this with [customer segment] by measuring [conversion, retention, paid adoption or usage]. The milestone is [specific result].”

Do not call a feature a moat. Explain what an incumbent would need to copy, what it would cost them and which part of your advantage remains unproven.

“How do you know the TAM is real?”

Say:

“Our first reachable segment is [defined customer group]. We calculate it from [known customer count, price or buying event]. The wider TAM is a hypothesis until [test] confirms it.”

Start with the segment you can reach. Do not defend a global estimate before explaining who buys, why they buy and what evidence would change your estimate.

Offer the bottom-up calculation. Name the number of plausible buyers, the buying event and the price assumption. Then state the next milestone:

“We will validate this estimate by speaking with [customer group] and converting [evidence] into paid demand. The next proof point is [qualified pipeline, paid pilots or repeat purchases].”

If the wider TAM comes from an industry report rather than your own customer evidence, label it as an estimate. Stripe’s angel-pitch guide supports a diligence-led case rather than an unsupported market claim.

“What happens if growth is slower?”

Say:

“We would cut [cost], protect [core activity] and track [milestone]. The downside case is [specific operational consequence], not a promise that the plan stays unchanged.”

Offer three cases: best-case, worst-case and most-likely. This is the approach advised by Stripe’s angel-pitch guide.

Explain what changes in each case. Reduce hiring, delay a market launch or narrow the customer segment only if those actions are real options. Then name the trigger for action:

“If [leading indicator] falls below [defined level], we will move to the downside plan and protect [priority].”

Do not present a forecast as a promise. The investor needs to hear how the business behaves when the plan misses.

“Why this valuation?”

Say:

“We based the valuation on [traction, comparable transactions, revenue, market evidence or round terms]. The assumptions are [assumption one] and [assumption two]. The risk is [specific risk], so I am treating the valuation as a discussion, not a fact.”

Offer the working evidence behind the number. That could include paid traction, revenue quality, intellectual property, team capability or the milestone the round is meant to buy. Do not use a large TAM as the valuation itself.

Then connect the valuation to a test:

“This round is intended to reach [milestone]. Once we have [evidence], we will have a stronger basis for the next financing discussion.”

If the angel asks for a precise ownership percentage, do not improvise legal or tax terms. Ownership equity, convertible debt and dilution depend on the documents and jurisdiction. Ask a qualified solicitor or accountant to check the proposed terms.

“What if churn stays high?”

Say:

“Our churn rate is [current position or unknown]. We believe the main cause is [tested cause]. We are testing [retention change] with [customer group], and the next milestone is [repeat-use or retained-customer result].”

Churn rate means the rate at which a startup loses customers, as Stripe’s angel-pitch guide explains. Offer a cohort view, cancellation reasons and the customer behaviour behind the calculation.

Separate a measurement problem from a product problem. If the data is thin, say:

“We do not yet have enough repeat usage to call this stable. This round funds [specific retention test], and we will decide whether to scale after [milestone].”

Do not hide churn inside a growth total. An angel needs to know whether new sales are replacing lost customers.

“Why should I believe this with no traction?”

Say:

“We do not have revenue yet. We have [customer evidence, prototype use, paid pilot, signed commitment or problem-specific behaviour]. The next test is [experiment], and this round funds it until [milestone].”

Offer the strongest evidence available. A founder interview is not revenue. An expression of interest is not a paid customer. A prototype demo proves operation, not repeatable demand.

If the company has no traction, explain why the evidence still matters and what it cannot prove:

“This evidence supports the problem and the first use case. It does not yet prove repeatable purchasing. We will test that through [paid pilot, conversion test or repeat-order milestone].”

The Founder Files pitch-deck analysis reports that reporting ARR correlated with twice the likelihood of raising at pre-seed. That relationship does not mean ARR is required, or that correlation proves causation. It does mean that measured commercial evidence deserves a clear place in the answer when it exists.

“What is the instrument and ownership impact?”

Say:

“We are considering [ownership equity or convertible debt]. The proposed amount is [amount], and the ownership impact depends on [valuation, discount, cap, conversion terms and future financing]. I will share the draft terms and have a qualified professional review them.”

Offer a plain-English cap table or worked illustration. Show the current ownership, the new investment and the assumptions that affect dilution. Keep the illustration separate from the final legal terms.

Then link the instrument to the milestone:

“The capital funds [specific uses] until [milestone]. We are seeking agreement on the structure as well as the business case.”

Do not bluff about a Delaware C corporation, limited liability company (LLC), employer identification number (EIN), 83(b) tax election or cross-border tax treatment (How to Approach Investors for Your Startup). Those details depend on jurisdiction and personal circumstances. A qualified solicitor or accountant must confirm the consequences.

“What happens if a founder gap remains?”

Say:

“The gap is [specific capability]. It matters because [business consequence]. We will cover it through [hire, adviser, co-founder, contractor or partner], and the next milestone is [proof that the gap is covered].”

Offer evidence of the proposed solution. Name the person or route if one exists, the cost or commitment involved and the work they will own. Do not list an impressive adviser without explaining their actual role.

If the gap remains open, say:

“We are not claiming this capability is solved. We are testing [recruitment, partnership or product workaround], and we will decide by [milestone or trigger].”

This answer shows control without pretending the team is complete. A relevant technical co-founder, prior startup experience or sector access can strengthen the case, but none removes the need to prove the next business assumption.

How should you buy thinking time without evasion?

Use this line:

“That is a fair challenge. Let me separate what we know from what we are testing.”

Then answer the question directly. Give the evidence first. Name the gap second. State the next test or milestone third. Return to the funding ask only after the objection is clear.

A pause is better than a fabricated answer. Record the question afterwards and add it to the next rehearsal. Razen’s live voice coach can be used by founders to practise responding to interruptions aloud instead of relying only on a linear presentation.

What should you avoid saying in front of an angel?

Angel investors need specific, testable claims, so replace “everyone needs this” with the customer, buying trigger and costly failure; HBS AngelsNYC’s pitch advice favours preparation, realism and honest risk disclosure over polish.

Do not hide weak traction, failed experiments, churn, monthly burn rate, founder gaps or regulatory risk. Say:

“We tested X. We learned Y. The next test is Z.”

Name the evidence you have. Name the evidence you do not have. A useful angel conversation should expose an assumption, not force false certainty.

Separate investor-fit research from outreach

Use the following names as places to research possible investor fit. Treat each as a starting point. Check sector, stage, geography, relevant experience and preferred investment size before contacting anyone. The dossier does not establish that every example performs the same function.

Channel	Fit checks	Outreach use
AngelList	Sector, stage and relevant portfolio interests	Identify a possible fit before seeking an introduction
US Angel Investment Network	Geography, sector and stated investment interests	Shortlist contacts for targeted research
Angel Match	Founder-investor fit and relevant experience	Compare potential introductions with your funding need
Crunchbase	Company activity, sector and investor history	Research patterns and prepare informed questions
Gust	Stage, sector and application requirements	Check whether your company matches the stated process
NACO / National Angel Capital Organization	Canadian networks and regional relevance	Research member networks before approaching
Canadian International Angel Investors	Geography, sector and cross-border fit	Check whether the investor context matches your round
Business accelerators	Cohort fit, sector focus and programme terms	Explore introductions, support and possible funding routes

A targeted message beats a generic one. Stripe’s investor-outreach guide recommends investor-fit research rather than sending the same pitch to everyone. Do not describe a name on a list as an endorsement.

Keep legal and tax terms precise

Do not bluff valuation, ownership equity, convertible debt, dilution, round leadership or investor returns. Say:

“The terms are under discussion. A qualified solicitor or accountant must confirm the legal and tax consequences.”

A Delaware C corporation, limited liability company (LLC), employer identification number (EIN) and 83(b) tax election involve jurisdiction-specific decisions (How to Approach Investors for Your Startup). Convertible debt and ownership equity also carry different legal and financial consequences. BDC’s angel-investor guide recommends preparing financial and legal information before investor scrutiny. Razen does not provide legal, tax or investment advice.

Avoid a fragile embedded demo. Keep a working fallback ready. Avoid unexplained jargon. Replace “um” and “uh” with a clean pause, and reduce repeated discourse markers such as “like”, “literally”, “you know”, “well”, “I mean” and “so”. HBS AngelsNYC’s pitch advice warns against unreliable pitch technology.

How do you rehearse the seed pitch out loud?

Stripe’s investor-outreach guidance recommends delivering a two-minute pitch without notes and practising it aloud with people outside the company, so use recording to test spoken recall rather than silent memorisation. (Stripe’s investor-outreach guidance)

Stripe supplies the two-minute, no-notes principle. The protocol below is my suggested method for turning that principle into interruption practice.

Suggested rehearsal protocol

Run	What you say	Pressure level	Pass condition
Preparation	Write one sentence for the problem, solution, proof, ask and use of funds. Aim for fifteen minutes.	None	Every sentence contains a concrete noun, customer, metric or milestone.
Run 1	Deliver the opening, problem, solution, evidence, ask and next step from a short prompt.	Friendly	Finish without reading notes.
Run 2	Repeat the same pitch aloud.	Friendly	Replace one vague claim with a specific customer, metric or milestone.
Run 3	Answer three objections from a tougher investor persona.	Challenging	Pause, answer the question asked and return to the milestone the funding buys.
Run 4	Ask a listener to interrupt after each major claim with “Why now?”, “How do you know?” or “What does the round buy?”	Interrupting	Answer directly, separate known evidence from an open assumption, then return to the milestone without restarting.
Review	Mark filler words, rushed sections, weak transitions and unsupported claims.	None	Choose one delivery fix and one content fix before the meeting.

The fifteen-minute preparation row and four-run sequence are recommendations, not findings from Stripe. Stripe’s sourced advice is to practise the two-minute version without notes and with people outside the company. (Stripe’s investor-outreach guidance)

Run 1 tests recall. Run 2 tests precision. Run 3 tests whether you can handle a direct objection. Run 4 tests whether you remain responsive when the angel breaks the linear pitch. Do not restart after a stumble. Say, “Let me answer that directly,” then continue from the point you reached.

Start each run in the position you will use for the meeting. Take one diaphragmatic breath before the opening line. Leave a clean pause before a difficult answer. Record the audio. Listen for rushed claims, missing transitions, repeated “um” or “uh”, and answers that avoid the question.

Use a simple five-point review of my own design: clear problem, credible evidence, specific ask, direct objection handling and controlled delivery. Give each item a mark of pass or revise. Treat the result as a practice signal, not a prediction of fundraising success. A human mentor, solicitor, accountant or regulated adviser remains appropriate for specialist questions.

Users can start “Seed pitch — friendly angel” in Razen with The Coach, Gentle & Realistic difficulty, Adversarial mode and a 5-dimension scoring / debrief. The Razen scenario library can be used when adapting the prompt.

What should you do after the angel says yes, no or send more information?

Angel follow-up should convert the conversation into one clear action: a meeting, a document review or a recorded learning point. If the investor says “send me more information”, reply: “I will send the short deck and the specific evidence behind [claim]. Could we book [next step] after you review it?” BDC’s angel-investor guidance supports relationship-led outreach and preparing for scrutiny, rather than treating one reply as a final verdict (BDC’s angel-investor guide).

For a soft no, ask: “Is the concern the market, evidence, terms, timing or fit?” Record the answer. Do not argue. A useful objection identifies a testable risk. Pressure, disrespect or demands for sensitive information are reasons to end the exchange.

Send relevant new information first. Follow up after 5–7 working days, then again 1–2 weeks later. After two unanswered follow-ups, move on, following Stripe’s investor-outreach guidance.

Stripe Atlas guidance discusses forming a Delaware C corporation, banking and payments. It is a possible resource, not legal or tax advice. Ask a qualified solicitor or accountant about your structure.

Razen Rehearsal Sandbox: The Friendly Angel Meeting That Should Earn a Second Conversation

It is Tuesday, 30 September, and Maya has 30 minutes on Zoom with Daniel, an angel investor, and Priya, a founder from Daniel’s portfolio. Maya is raising $250,000 to reach 20 paying teams by March; the risk is that she tries to win a cheque today instead of learning whether her retention assumption survives scrutiny.

Setting. A 30-minute Zoom meeting with Maya, Daniel and Priya. Maya has a short deck open, but the spoken pitch must work if the screen share fails.

Cast

• Maya, Founder seeking the next meeting. At stake: She needs useful investor feedback and a credible path to $250,000.
• Daniel, Angel deciding whether to engage. At stake: He must protect his time and judge whether the milestone is investable.
• Priya, Portfolio founder testing the pitch. At stake: She can validate the customer pain or expose a weak retention claim.

The Wrong Way

Maya: Thanks for making the time. We’re building the leading AI voice rehearsal platform for anyone who has a high-stakes conversation, and we’re raising $250,000 today.

(Starts too fast, smiles tightly, and points at the funding slide before naming one customer.)

Daniel: What does the $250,000 get you?

(Leans towards the camera and keeps his question short.)

Maya: It gets us product, marketing, hiring and enough runway to become the obvious category leader. We’ve got a huge market, and the upside is massive.

(Lists uses of funds in one breath, with both hands moving over the keyboard.)

Priya: Which customer is paying now, and what are they doing after the first session?

(Tilts her head and waits, watching for a concrete answer.)

Maya: We’re early, but the feedback has been fantastic. Users love the privacy angle. Retention isn’t really the concern yet because we need distribution first.

(Laughs once, glances at the deck, and answers the second question before the first.)

Daniel: So you don’t have repeat usage data yet?

(Stops taking notes and looks directly into the camera.)

Maya: Not in the way you mean, but if you’re interested, I’d really like you to come into the round. We can sort the details after you’ve seen the full deck.

(Raises her voice slightly and turns the request into a closing push.)

Priya: I’m not sure we know what this round is proving. Send the deck and we’ll think about it.

(Closes her notebook and shifts back from the screen.)

Why it fails. Maya treats the meeting as a request for an immediate cheque. The lines “the leading” and “the upside is massive” replace evidence with scale language, while “retention isn’t really the concern yet” dodges Priya’s test. Daniel leaves without a clear business question or reason to schedule another call.

The Right Way

Maya: I’m building Razen for professionals who rehearse one consequential conversation at a time. We have 42 paid users, and I’m raising $250,000 to reach 20 paying teams by March. I’d value your view on whether that is the right test and whether a second conversation makes sense.

(Takes one slow breath, keeps both feet still, and delivers the ask without looking at the slide.)

Daniel: Why now? People have practised interviews and pitches without this for years.

(Raises one eyebrow and leaves a beat after the challenge.)

Maya: The trigger is repeated demand from careers teams that cannot run private mock practice at scale. Forty-two users have paid; repeat use is still unproven. This round tests whether teams renew after three months.

(Pauses after “paid,” then separates known evidence from the open test.)

Priya: Why would a team use this instead of a manager or a general voice assistant?

(Leans forward, elbows near the desk, and keeps her tone practical.)

Maya: Teams get a private rehearsal with a defined scenario, pressure level and score across five delivery measures. Our gap is retention: we have not shown that the scores change behaviour or renewals yet.

(Keeps her gaze on Priya and lets the final sentence land without defending it.)

Daniel: And the $250,000 goes where, exactly?

(Opens his notes again and waits silently.)

Maya: It funds one product hire, team pilots and six months of customer research. The milestone is 20 paying teams by March, with monthly renewal data. If that test fits your view, could we book a 45-minute second conversation next week to examine the cohort results and terms?

(Names the milestone slowly, then makes the next-step request instead of asking for a commitment today.)

Priya: Yes, if you send the current renewal table and the three pilot designs. I’d want the second call to focus on what happens if renewal stays below target.

(Nods once and writes two items in her notebook.)

Why it lands. Maya makes the funding-to-milestone link explicit and labels retention as unproven. She pays a cost: the pitch sounds narrower and less certain, and Daniel receives a reason to challenge the plan. That honesty gives Priya a concrete role and earns a possible second conversation based on evidence, not enthusiasm.

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Delivery playbook

Tone shifts

• Start measured and specific for the opening; shift to slower, firmer speech when naming the $250,000 and March milestone.
• When Daniel asks “Why now?”, move from promotional energy to an evidence-first tone. State the paid-user count before explaining the test.
• When admitting the retention gap, lower volume slightly and keep the sentence short; do not rush to soften it with an apology.

Pause placement

• Pause for 2 seconds after “42 paid users” so the evidence is heard before the funding ask.
• Pause for 2 seconds after “repeat use is still unproven” before explaining what the round tests.
• Pause for 3 seconds after asking for the 45-minute second conversation. Do not fill Daniel’s silence with another benefit.

Physiological cues

• Before the opening, exhale for 4 seconds and place both feet flat under the desk; suppress the urge to glance at the funding slide.
• Keep one hand on the desk when naming the amount. If the other hand starts circling, place it flat beside the keyboard.
• During Priya’s challenge, look at the camera for one full sentence, then glance at the notes only after saying “our gap is retention.”

Recovery moves

• If you start claiming scale, stop and say: “Let me replace that broad claim with the evidence we have: 42 paid users.”
• If you dodge the retention question, say: “I answered around that. The direct answer is no, we have not proved renewal yet.”
• If Daniel pushes for a commitment, say: “I’m not asking you to decide today. I’m asking whether this milestone is worth testing in a second conversation.”

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Frequently asked questions

How long should an angel investor pitch be?

Use a short format for the first exchange. Stripe and BDC support an elevator pitch under or around 60 seconds, while Stripe’s outreach guide recommends a roughly two-minute version for getting a meeting. Practise both, then expand into the pitch deck only when the investor wants more detail.

What is the most important line in an angel pitch?

The funding-to-milestone line matters most: “We are raising [amount] to reach [specific milestone] by [time or condition].” It links the ask to a testable business outcome. If the milestone is unclear, the investor cannot judge what the round buys or what evidence comes next.

How do I pitch without revenue or traction?

Name the problem, the customer behaviour that proves it exists and the next experiment that tests demand. Do not disguise interviews, pilots or intentions as revenue. Say what remains unproven, explain why your team can run the test, and ask for feedback on that risk.

Should I use a pitch deck or speak without slides?

Use the deck as support, not as a script. Start with the spoken problem, solution, evidence and ask. If slides fail or distract, continue without them. HBS AngelsNYC specifically warns against unreliable pitch technology, while SBN describes a conventional ten-part deck structure.

How can I stop saying “um” during an investor pitch?

Do not chase perfect silence. Record the pitch, mark repeated fillers and replace one habit at a time with a breath or short pause. Diaphragmatic breathing before the opening line also slows the first sentence. Keep natural pauses; sounding memorised creates a different delivery problem.